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Since she's jumping, I'm led to wonder if she's ascending or descending because the position of the hair says she must be going up, but her overall posture looks more like she's coming in for a landing.
As for the colors and shadows, you've done pretty well overall, but her whole body would cast a shadow upon her hair. You have a gap in the shadows on the hair adjacent to her torso region that's inexplicable since you have shadows going along her torso and thigh right next to it.
I would also suggest adding some highlights since she's a machine, some strong hotspots here and there to make her look shiny. Consider your light source and think about what part of each segment of her armor would be closest to it, and put some white spots in those places. It's not necessary and can easily make a piece look over-rendered, but done with subtlety it can really enhance the look of a piece like this.